Wednesday, September 2, 2009

my favorite poem

My favorite poem
My favorite poem is To Goodbye
By Gary R. Hess

don't really want to say goodbye
I don't really want to leave you
But now I have to go away
Stay away from you forever

What we had was something special
Deep down from our hearts
But now I have to go away
And leave you from my heart.
I like this poem because it have a really good meaning, how it positive about break up and help people who heart have broken move on and have a good reason to leave that boy or girl. This poem mean to me is that if I feel something awkward or not feels right about my relationship, I can move on and fine something new and I don’t have to worry about the old thing and I not feel bad to what I did and I not have to regret for what I did. Every relationship will end even though we don’t want to end it but we have to because we always want something new and fill up our dream. So the people who is heartbroken don’t feel bad because it always something new and excited in the future that we have to confront.
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13 comments:

  1. Hyung Joo ^_^September 2, 2009 at 9:39 PM

    First~~~!!
    good jjob oall
    where did u read this poem? lol
    bibi

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  2. princess BaeSeptember 2, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    nice poem Oall!:)
    i liked it!

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2009 at 9:45 PM

    hey! nice poem :]

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  4. sixuSeptember 4, 2009 at 6:53 PM

    hey~ nice poem~ goodbye o/.\o

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  5. SunshineSeptember 7, 2009 at 1:20 PM

    Hey Oalll
    i don't wanna say good bye ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
    nice pome oall!><

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  6. ★Dai Xiang☆September 7, 2009 at 8:19 PM

    David, nice~

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  7. I Will Rock Your World!September 7, 2009 at 8:24 PM

    samson, cool

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  8. ★Dai Xiang☆September 7, 2009 at 9:28 PM

    Hi, This is David. i read your essay again. your eassy is meaningful and understandable. i would love to remember that, even every detail. "To Goodbye"’ is the book i will read for next mouth, i think your writing is good.

    good job Oall

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  9. JamezSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:28 PM

    ahh cool poem! i like it, for the fact that it means a lot to many of the people that will read this.

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  10. I Will Rock Your World!September 7, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    this is somewhat interesting, i couldnt believe that happened. thats nice anyways samson.

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  11. princess BaeSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    hey oall, i read ur writing again!
    it is short but it has lots of meaning!
    nice writing!and i like ur type of writing><

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  12. razmatazz93September 8, 2009 at 3:30 AM

    hey, i like your perspective. and most of the time, yup-when something goes bad, the best thing to do is move on =)

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  13. sixuSeptember 8, 2009 at 5:22 AM

    again....anyway,spirit will forever be with us then material ~~~

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